Lonely Visitor

On the edge of things
I’ll never know
how to swim on the surface
of your skin
or why the water ripples
in checkerboard across your chest
while you swim on my ocean
and twist in my bed
tying knots in my covers
wrapped up in a gown of white and red
and when you’re spirited from the window
of this room where you cannot stay
I’ll call after you, my lonely visitor
whose name I can never say

~ by two of us, riding rainclouds on July 6, 2009.

4 Responses to “Lonely Visitor”

  1. I absolutely love this…..Gypsy

  2. this is now my favorite…sissi

  3. This is amazing and beautiful. I have been touched by your poems before, but I really love this one. It reminds me a little of one I wrote long ago… that wasn’t nearly as good!

    • Thanks so much. I’m glad everyone seems to be liking this so much. I’m working on compiling a book and judging by response I’m guessing this is going somewhere in the beginning. You’ll have to link me to that similar poem, I’d love to read it.

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