Lonely Visitor
On the edge of things
I’ll never know
how to swim on the surface
of your skin
or why the water ripples
in checkerboard across your chest
while you swim on my ocean
and twist in my bed
tying knots in my covers
wrapped up in a gown of white and red
and when you’re spirited from the window
of this room where you cannot stay
I’ll call after you, my lonely visitor
whose name I can never say

I absolutely love this…..Gypsy
gypsytala said this on July 6, 2009 at 2:13 pm |
this is now my favorite…sissi
Elisabeth said this on July 7, 2009 at 3:31 pm |
This is amazing and beautiful. I have been touched by your poems before, but I really love this one. It reminds me a little of one I wrote long ago… that wasn’t nearly as good!
lizziviggi said this on July 31, 2009 at 11:24 am |
Thanks so much. I’m glad everyone seems to be liking this so much. I’m working on compiling a book and judging by response I’m guessing this is going somewhere in the beginning. You’ll have to link me to that similar poem, I’d love to read it.
two of us, riding rainclouds said this on July 31, 2009 at 12:22 pm |